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Shapeless Sun Page 13 by InkRose98 Shapeless Sun Page 13 by InkRose98
Whew! I'm finally done with this page. :P
I took awhile, considering I just started my new school and such.
I'm sorry there isn't much to this page, but I swear the next one will be worth your while.

Find the rest of the comic here: [link]
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:iconminecraftmusic75:
Mind blown, whats going to happen next amazing cliffhangers are an awesome way to keep people interested so congratulations I'm hooked. You are so original to come up with this kind of story line. I am astounded at your art it looks amazing, each of the charters look how they are supposed to which is great. I love how the speech bubbles are color coded so you can tell who is talking. The face expressions are fantastic they capture the charters and give them their rightful personalty. It's nice to see you kind of started in the middle so people not only want to find out what happens next but also what lead up to this. All and all its really good and I look forward to the next part.
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I do think that this story has been put together well so far but I did happen to notice a mistake in the drawing. Pinkie Pie's head is just a tad deformed. Other than that I think this is amazing. And I'm going to figure out why Apple Jack is counting. And I hate seeing Flutter Shy crying. Even thought she does that a lot.
It makes me want to cry. This story is beautiful and I will continue on reading the rest so far. Happy drawing!

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:iconappassionata17:
Appassionata17 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Twilight! She's paralyzed!!!!
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:iconlouise56:
louise56 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
:iconmoarplz:
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:iconyellowninja123:
YellowNinja123 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
I guess we now know how she got an army in the first place, she transforms them by using her powers
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:icondarthwill3:
DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Poor Fluttershy's crying...
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:iconfallen12345:
Fallen12345 Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Without Twilight they never had a chance. xD jk, jk. x3
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:icontoeyak5973:
Toeyak5973 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013
That headache must suck....
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:iconmenollysagittaria:
MenollySagittaria Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Discord did the same thing . . .
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:iconcjkh807:
CJKH807 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
NNNNNOOOOOO! TWILIGHT :iconepicnuuplz:
btw nice page so far :)
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:iconjetweaver:
Jetweaver Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
what is going to happen to twilight.
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:iconminecraftmusic75:
MinecraftMusic75 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
when is there more?
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:iconmorphiusx:
MorphiusX Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
At forst I thought Chrysallis completely destroyed Twilight's horn into pieces...

Chrysallis really urks me! So I made this as a rebottle---> [link]
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:iconpegazus14:
pegazus14 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Owwhh come oooonnnn! Continue! PLEASE! I have to see whats happening!!!!!
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:iconkyoyatategamilover55:
KyoyaTategamiLover55 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh my god so cool!!!
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:iconinkrose98:
InkRose98 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
XD Thanks!
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:iconkyoyatategamilover55:
KyoyaTategamiLover55 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Its true. Are you gonna make Celestia a changeling? I mean, to the end? 'cus I love her. :D
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:iconwaylah2004:
waylah2004 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
hate it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconpegazus14:
pegazus14 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
if you hate it why watching ... take your plase somewhere else and tolerate if somepony is making its own story! Thank you.
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:iconwaylah2004:
waylah2004 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
i hate it
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:iconinkrose98:
InkRose98 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Ok. Thank you for expressing your opinion.
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:iconpegazus14:
pegazus14 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Hate is never a good way to go... :C
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:iconinkrose98:
InkRose98 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Yea...
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:iconwaylah2004:
waylah2004 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
what happened?
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:iconinkrose98:
InkRose98 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Twilight's horn was rotted away by Chrysalis' magic.
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Crazycartoonfan13 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO why did you end it there!!!!!:iconpinkiepiesadplz:
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ireneloverandkisser Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Artist
:iconpinkiepiesadplz: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
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:iconcrazycartoonfan13:
Crazycartoonfan13 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
hahahahahaha i really like your story
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:icondekra234:
Dekra234 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
Poor Twi. That must e the biggest shock for her.
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:iconinkrose98:
InkRose98 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Yea... :(
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:icondekra234:
Dekra234 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
Hope she will be ok. But it looks not so.
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:iconsanyo2100:
Sanyo2100 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i...i cannot express with words how great is this..i...*fall a tear* keep going buddy, just keep going, i wanna know what happen next
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:iconinkrose98:
InkRose98 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Don't worry, I will. :) Thank you!
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:iconsanyo2100:
Sanyo2100 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
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:iconcommander-draco:
commander-draco Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
Oh thank Faust it's just badly damaged for a sec there I thought it was going to dissolve complete!... Now there's a chance it can be repaired... And now I'm going to throw up in shock and horror. Keep it up this story is getting good.
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:iconinkrose98:
InkRose98 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Chrysalis would never waste precious killing energy on stupid little ponies... she just maims them and lets them be on their way.
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:iconcommander-draco:
commander-draco Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
and that may be her undoing. maybe
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:iconreshirammaster:
RESHIRAMMASTER Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
Emergerd da suspenze!
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:iconinkrose98:
InkRose98 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:iconsuspenseplz: Will Twilight ever get her horn healed? Will justice prevail in a tattered world? Will Chrysalis ever be defeated?!?!? FIND OUT NEXT TIME ON SHAPELESS SUN! :D
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:icongay-l0rdz:
GAY-L0RDZ Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Artist
love this comic its awsome,keep going!
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:iconinkrose98:
InkRose98 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! I certainly will! :D
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:iconcherymiste:
CheryMiste Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
I love it so far! :D
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:iconinkrose98:
InkRose98 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank ya! :D
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:iconjelenadbz:
Jelenadbz Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Filmographer
poor her
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:iconredmarkerrellik:
RedMarkerRellik Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
RUUUUUUUUuuun!!!!

Seriously though, every time you post a new chapter I look forward to the next one.
Great work.
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:iconinkrose98:
InkRose98 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
When Apple Jack counts to three, you better get the frick out of there.

That's what I hope. XD I don't want to torture people with suspense, but I do at the same time to keep them reading. :) I can't wait to release the next page, so I might even start working on it early.
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:iconcrucifythewolf:
CrucifyTheWolf Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
O-O............................WHAT WILL HAPPEN?!
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:iconinkrose98:
InkRose98 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
DUN DUN DUUUUN
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:iconcrucifythewolf:
CrucifyTheWolf Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
COME ON TWILIGHT!PULL THROUGH!!!!
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:iconshadowprv4777:
shadowprv4777 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Artist
Love it
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