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Shapeless Sun Page 13by *InkRose98

Digital Art / Vector / Fantasy

Whew! I'm finally done with this page.

I took awhile, considering I just started my new school and such.
I'm sorry there isn't much to this page, but I swear the next one will be worth your while.

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Critique by ~MinecraftMusic75 Jan 19, 2013, 6:38:45 PM

Mind blown, whats going to happen next amazing cliffhangers are an awesome way to keep people interested so congratulations I'm hooked. You are so original to come up with this kind of story line. I am astounded at your art it looks amazing, each of the charters look how they are supposed to which is great. I love how the speech bubbles are color coded so you can tell who is talking. The face expressions are fantastic they capture the charters and give them their rightful personalty. It's nice to see you kind of started in the middle so people not only want to find out what happens next but also what lead up to this. All and all its really good and I look forward to the next part.

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