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Shapeless Sun Page 13 by InkRose98 Shapeless Sun Page 13 by InkRose98
Whew! I'm finally done with this page. :P
I took awhile, considering I just started my new school and such.
I'm sorry there isn't much to this page, but I swear the next one will be worth your while.

Find the rest of the comic here: [link]
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Mind blown, whats going to happen next amazing cliffhangers are an awesome way to keep people interested so congratulations I'm hooked. You are so original to come up with this kind of story line. I am astounded at your art it looks amazing, each of the charters look how they are supposed to which is great. I love how the speech bubbles are color coded so you can tell who is talking. The face expressions are fantastic they capture the charters and give them their rightful personalty. It's nice to see you kind of started in the middle so people not only want to find out what happens next but also what lead up to this. All and all its really good and I look forward to the next part.
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I do think that this story has been put together well so far but I did happen to notice a mistake in the drawing. Pinkie Pie's head is just a tad deformed. Other than that I think this is amazing. And I'm going to figure out why Apple Jack is counting. And I hate seeing Flutter Shy crying. Even thought she does that a lot.
It makes me want to cry. This story is beautiful and I will continue on reading the rest so far. Happy drawing!

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Appassionata17 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Twilight! She's paralyzed!!!!
louise56 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
YellowNinja123 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
I guess we now know how she got an army in the first place, she transforms them by using her powers
DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Poor Fluttershy's crying...
Fallen12345 Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Without Twilight they never had a chance. xD jk, jk. x3
Toeyak5973 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013
That headache must suck....
MenollySagittaria Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Discord did the same thing . . .
CJKH807 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
NNNNNOOOOOO! TWILIGHT :iconepicnuuplz:
btw nice page so far :)
Jetweaver Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
what is going to happen to twilight.
MinecraftMusic75 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
when is there more?
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