<3 ur so good at this! I really want to be as good as you when I grow up! (Sorry it sounds cheesy it's true) anyway if you have the time could you look at my story called "The Throne Of The Pegusi"? I wanna see if u approve
Wow, your so calm on your show, I wouldn't pegged you for being good at sarcasm (being serious, it takes talent to translte it to written word)
But my negative views aren't on your fanfic, but shipping in general. My philosophy is the fan made media should match the source material, you aren't going to find well written plots about romance, or a tragic backstory for the villains, because its not that kind of show, its supposed to be fun, even at its darkest, grossest, and worst written, it still retains that atmosphere. Honestly, I think the writers are just going to have Discord be a solitary eternal being, Chrysalis born a changeling, and Sombra as a foreign power who Luna and Celestia did not know. Your ideas are better, but this isn't Avatar the Last Airbender, or any of the DCAU shows.
But, shipping is not my problem, as that can be pulled off to some extent, my BIG problem with particulary this fandom can be summed up in one word: cupcakes.